This week for my reading our goal was Select from a wide range of genre when reading independently.
We chose 3 articles from different category's (category's like world and sport), then had to list the
who, what, where, when and why; We also had to make a better title for the text.
My work from this week is bellow. :)
Article 1:
Prime Minster receives Covid-19 vaccination - National
(They spelt the title wrong)
Better headline; One step closer to vaccinating the whole country
Who; Prime Minister Jacinda Ardern and the chief adviser Juliet Gerrard
What; They got their vaccination
Where; Auckland New Zealand
When; Don’t know but the article was published on the 20th of June
Why; She got her vaccine because there is covid
Jelly effect; It was a big milestone to the country
Shifts in formality; “It was pretty pain free” “For me it is a real big milestone to be apart of what is the biggest
vaccination event and the biggest health roll out of our history is a really important milestone for me”
Article 2:
Bear gets stuck in factory ceiling - Interest Article
Better title; How did the bear get up there?
Who; Bear, employees
What; The bear gets stuck in the ceiling employers have to stay in the cafeteria
Where; Volvo factory (car manufacturer in Virginia USA)
When; Doesn’t say but the article was published on the 14th of june
Why; Don’t know
Jelly effect; bear in the ceiling
Shifts in formality; “a suitable site for release”
Article 3:
Swimming NZ to send 7 swimmers to Tokyo Olympics - Sport
Better title; The super seven swimmers
Who; Olympic swimmers
Lewis Clareburt
Zac Reid
Erika Fairweather
Eve Thomas
Hayley McIntosh
Ali Galyer
Carina Doyle
What; Seven swimmers going to the Olympics for the first time
Where; Tokyo Olympics
Why; Because the Olympics are coming up
When; 2020 but postponed to 2021 and the article was published on the 16th of June
Jelly effect; One of the swimmers Erika Fairweather is only 17 and she is the youngest athlete to represent
New Zealand at the Olympics
Shifts in formality; “She is thrilled to be heading to her first Olympic games”
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